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[RP] A Realm Reborn - The Seventh Dawn (Pt. 2)

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Alright, I've taken a break, eaten a couple of snacks, and now, I'm ready to tell the rest of this tale. Where were we... ah, yes. Lahabrea.

Naturally, he had to show up when we least expected it - when we thought we had won.

"Fools! The real power of the Ultima Weapon lies within its now beating heart. The magic inside has been dormant for eons... a spell without parallel. Ultima!"

Responding to the Ascian's words, the automaton glowed with a blinding light that grew and grew until we could see nothing but white.

There was an explosion the likes of which I'd never heard before. When my eyes regained sight, all I could see was destruction - the fortress around us had been blasted to rubble. Around us, there was nothing but a ring of fire.

Somehow, my allies and myself were still standing. Hydaelyn had protected us, but it was doubtful that she would be able to shield us from another blast. We were at Lahabrea's mercy.

Or so he thought. Faintly, in the back of my mind, I heard the Mothercrystal's voice.

"If thou would pierce the shadows, make thee a staff of light..."

"Destroy the machina!" I called to my comrades. "The Ascian is mine!"

I can't say how or why, but I knew it was time for me to do what I was destined to do. On instinct, I exhaled and closed my eyes.

When I opened them, I was floating in the void where Hydaelyn dwells. Lahabrea was there too, his dark silhouette suspended before me.



This was exactly like the very first vision the Echo had brought to me - that's how I knew what I had to do. The Crystals of Light suddenly surrounded me, their power concentrating in my hands in the form of a staff of pure light. I struck Lahabrea with all the power, all the rage, all the hope I had left.

I next came back to my senses, and instantly wished I hadn't - my whole body was hurting, my skin, my bones and everything in between. Gaius and my comrades had evacuated the scene, leaving behind the caved in carcass of the Ultima Weapon. I was lying on the ground in the ring of fire, next to Lahabrea.

Except it wasn't the Ascian, not anymore - the red symbol covering his face was gone, and all was left was Thancred, pale and motionless. For a moment, I feared the worst, but soon, I noticed his chest rise and fall weakly. He was still breathing!

"Maybe not for long", I thought, alarmed. Around us, the ruins of the fortress were collapsing on themselves, and the flames were growing taller by the minute. Soon, we would be trapped.

I got up with the utmost difficulty and tried to lift Thancred, but he was simply too heavy for me. Smoke from the fire grated my lungs until I collapsed back to the ground, coughing. Black spots started to crowd my vision and I felt myself slip away.

I felt a strange sense of peace amidst the pain. We had succeeded. I had executed my task. I could go now, and rest, finally, forever in the light of the Crystal.

But then I thought of my family and all the people I had met this last year - Sylphie, the Scions, Isel, Painted Mesa, Jospaire... Jospaire, to whom I had promised I would come back.

Couldn't I live for them? Couldn't I live... for myself?

"Help", I managed to say weakly. "Someone... get us out of here... Y'shtola... Cid... Haurchefant..."

I coughed some more.

"Please, anyone... Amalthea... Akoman."

I stayed conscious only long enough to see a yellow shape materialize somewhere up high. Then, darkness finally claimed me.

It kept me for a very long time.

But eventually, I did emerge. Above me, again, was the color yellow - it took me a while to understand that I was staring at the roof of a Twin Adder military tent.

Someone came to my side - Minfilia! She seemed very pleased to see that I was awake.

"We were somewhat surprised", she said, "when an ahriman came out of the ruined fortress with Thancred on its head. We thought it was one of the Ascian's tricks... until the creature opened its mouth, unrolled its tongue and placed you on the ground."

"...I was in Akoman's mouth?"

Minfilia laughed - a wonderful sound, full of music and freedom. In her demeanor alone, I could tell that a great shadow had been lifted from her mind.

"Indeed. Maybe he was shielding you from the fire. Or maybe he had a mind to eat you but decided otherwise. Who knows?"

Soon after, I received word that my presence was expected at a very important ceremony. Painted Mesa (who of course insisted on being by my side the whole time) placed me on his shoulder and took me to a hill near a lake I recognized - Lake Silvertear.

I was elated to see that the Archons were all there, as well as the leaders of the three City-States: Admiral Merlwyb, General Raubahn and Elder Seedseer Kan-E-Senna. They spoke of how through sheer willpower and courage, Eorzeans had managed to unite themselves against the Empire.

"True to their name, the Scions of the Seventh Dawn, along with our champion, have delivered us from darkness. Let it be writ that on that day, by the light of the Crystal... Eorzea ushered in a new era! The seventh astral era is come!

And thus is ours... a realm reborn!"

Everyone cheered, and soon, I found myself cheering too, swept away by the wave of unadulterated joy that washed over the crowd. The dawn of a new era... I never thought I would live to see such a thing, and much less help bring it into existence.

What's more, I survived doing so. I wasn't expecting to. I'll admit I feel a little lost right now! I wonder what lies ahead for me, now that this destiny of mine has been fulfilled.

Had I perished in the Praetorium, things would have been so much more simple: I would have been the Chosen One who sacrificed himself to save the world. A simple tale, for simple times.

But that day on that hill, I looked at my friends, my heart swelling with love and pride, and raised my eyes to the heavens. My smile felt as bright as the sunlit skies above.



For these these are not simple times. I am still here. I still have a place in this realm.

And a story to tell.
Commentaires (13)

Annabel Ashcroft

Faerie [Aether]

Yay, you got the first one finished, now keep going hun, there's a LOT more to do! LOL

Hey, most don't get this far, very few here have done a whole MSQ story arc.

Lalli Physalis

Sargatanas [Aether]

Thanks a lot Annabel! I'm not sure where I'll take this project now (having 3 more expansions ahead is hella intimidating) but it was important to me to finish chronicling this arc at the very least.

I'm the type who often abandons projects in the middle so I'm very proud of myself for sticking with it this long xD

Annabel Ashcroft

Faerie [Aether]

Yeah, it IS a lot to write to do the whole thing. ;-)

I'm getting close to my 100th 'Day' entry. I started it on day 45 and I am currently on Day 135. And that does not even count all the other crap I did such as the interludes, early years, and journal entries.

Sometimes I wonder HOW I keep going. LOL

Well, I hope you still find some muse in you to keep going. To make it easier on you, you may want to condense the 100 quest thing leading up to HW. I did, it was just too much to write.

Lalli Physalis

Sargatanas [Aether]

Damn, I knew you've been blogging for a long time but I didn't realize how long. That takes some dedication!

That's a good idea, I really need a break from covering the MSQ, especially since the stretch between ARR and HW is not always super compelling. I'm gonna think of how I can switch things up a lil to talk about the bits I like and skip the rest. I want to do more short "wax poetic about how pretty the game is" posts xD

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

Oh man! I remember reading this and wanting to take a while to compose my thoughts on it. And then it slipped my mind. Lol!

So, I want to say that before I read your last 2 entries I felt you had a difficult task. The Praetorium has become one giant meme thanks to MSQ Roulette, and people can recite every word of the cutscenes by heart. I felt it would be tough to write an entertaining narrative about the whole experience.

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

Given that, I felt you made the right choice in skipping most of the battles and focusing mainly on the emotions of the characters. And I liked your creative use of the cutscene from early on in the MSQ to represent defeating Lahabrea in a 1v1, that is actually quite genius!

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

Lalli's words as he is about to collapse are interesting. His first thoughts are that the mission is done and he can die in peace, understandable. But Lalli being basically a Hobbit, in a very hobbitlike way, remembers his friends and family and desires to live for them.

But then he also goes on to say "Couldn't I live... for myself?" I choose to interpret this as him realizing that death is not the only end - that now, he has fulfilled his destiny and can live a truly free life after all.

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

I think this interpretation brings the story of Lalli (or the first arc at least) to a happy ending. I hope to see more of Lalli's adventures - Though if you want to end his story here - this is as good a finale as ever!

Finally, I really liked that you abandoned the role of Maggie the magitek armor and have Akoman save Lalli. To be honest, we heartlessly left that armor to die alone twice and made it sacrifice itself for us once, there is no way it would want to come back to save us, haha.

Lalli Physalis

Sargatanas [Aether]

Ahh Sig I love how you always get me <3 Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments!

You guessed it, I did scratch my head a little when faced with the challenge of making this finale interesting, and in the end I decided to focus on the emotional part of finally accomplishing your destiny. As for switching Maggie for Akoman, that was an easy choice to make, I just never bonded with that magitek armor xD Plus it's true that the WoL does her so dirty, why would she even help?

Lalli Physalis

Sargatanas [Aether]

As for Lalli's thoughts before he collapses, you hit the nail on the head there too! Lalli had a lot of feelings about having a destiny, oh boy. He found it exciting and mysterious, but eventually it started taking over his identity- occasionally he'd wonder if he was still a real person, if he still had free will, etc. In that scene before he passes out, he remembers his destiny isn't and was never everything, that he's loved, and still has value as a person. And so he finds his will to live.

Lalli Physalis

Sargatanas [Aether]

Lastly I did my best to finish this arc like the 1st Star Wars movie xD in a way that would make sense both if I continued the story and if I didn't. I really liked this experience and I'd like to write about HW (my fave expansion) too! But yeah I'll have to see if time allows it.

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

Oh! That's clever, leaving open the possibility of a new book while still having a sense of finality.

I know Annabel suggested condensing the 100-quest stretch leading up to Heavensward. I had a thought the other day, which is to take it a step further and just start in media res at the beginning of HW, walking into Foundation alongside Alphi and Tataru. It fits the lost and desolate atmosphere of the MSQ at that point perfectly.

Siglinde Skysworn

Sargatanas [Aether]

Alternately, considering that "Heavensward" is actually a book written in-universe by Lord Edmont, the framing story for HW could be Lalli's own annotations to the book, focusing on some key moments without having to retell the whole story.

Anyway, I'm sure if you do decide to tackle the project, it'll be a worthwhile read!
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